The Piper's Debt, Version 2.0 - Complete
I have finished editting the Piper's Debt. That right, I'm speedy. There are about two thousand less words than there were before. I chopped out hundred of adverbs, took away stupid filler phrases, changed the age of the children, changed the name of Vivian's maid, added in some extra tiny hints so that the reader may infer extra things, etc. Point is, the thing is done.
I feel very excited and yet afraid of sending it to people. I took some chances in this story that I haven't before, though I don't think anyone will see the chances as such. I think this story is much better than Death to Life and am anxious to get feedback.
I will be sending out copies for people to read tonight. Some people will have their copies delayed because I need their email. (I'm looking at YOU, Jimmy! Though I see an MSN contact on your blog. I"ll probably try that.) After that comes one of the parts I hate the most - Waiting a month for everyone to finish reading. It's painful. Very, very painful.
Two books written. Time to work on finishing a third.
**EDIT** I sent a copy to the email listed for Tenas at the End of Eternity forums. If this is a bad email let me know so I can resend. kthxbai!
I feel very excited and yet afraid of sending it to people. I took some chances in this story that I haven't before, though I don't think anyone will see the chances as such. I think this story is much better than Death to Life and am anxious to get feedback.
I will be sending out copies for people to read tonight. Some people will have their copies delayed because I need their email. (I'm looking at YOU, Jimmy! Though I see an MSN contact on your blog. I"ll probably try that.) After that comes one of the parts I hate the most - Waiting a month for everyone to finish reading. It's painful. Very, very painful.
Two books written. Time to work on finishing a third.
**EDIT** I sent a copy to the email listed for Tenas at the End of Eternity forums. If this is a bad email let me know so I can resend. kthxbai!
posted by Trintara at 9:52 AM
3 Comments:
Yay!
Finally finished DTL also, want to reread a few parts and gather my thoughts. :-)
Damn, that was fast. All hail Vatis, the speedy reader!
I have it in my mail box and will start reading tonight!
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